Tuesday, February 11, 2014

The Elements and Principles of Design with Images




White Space Activity 1: Elements & Principles in Photograph Analysis 



  • About the Photo
  • Title: Amateur contest for children Final eliminations, Sept. 24, 1936.
  • Creator(s): Levine, Estelle, artist
  • Date Created/Published: [New York : Federal Art Project], 1936.
  • Medium: 1 print on board (poster) : silkscreen, color.
  • Summary: Poster announcing amateur piano contest, showing two girls playing piano.Source: http://www.loc.gov/pictures/collection/wpapos/item/97502865

ELEMENT #...

1. SPACE

There is a right amount of space on this poster; even the girl's extended leg fits neatly in the space. The spaces are uneven in all four corners and its irregularity creates a playful and comfortable feel to the poster. 

2. LINE

There are straight and curvy lines throughout the images and font. The combination continues to bring a playful tone to the image. Most of the lines are slanted with a positive slope and also brings a friendly tone to it. It provides an informal tone and almost illustrates the essence of music- how it is not straight forward and a bit quirky. 

3. SHAPE

The shapes of the dresses yields to an inorganic shape, a perfect circle. The tops of the girls' heads and hands are also similar to a circle. To me, I think that the first shape that the child learns to draw is a circle, albeit, not a perfect circle. The popularity of circles in this poster, as illustrated in the font as well, supports the child-focused theme of the poster. 

4. SIZE

The grand piano, being the largest, grabs one's attention first, then, it would be the girls playing at the piano. The size of the piano illustrates that the amateur contest will be about music, specifically, with the piano. it does not even need to be described via text; it is described visually. The poster's sizing of the piano did an effective job embedding event information through visuals. 

5. PATTERN

There isn't really a pattern in this poster except for the duplicated style of another girl. With that, it adds minor familiarity to the piece. 

6. TEXTURE

The background has a texture of a chalkboard, again, bringing out the theme of children as we may associate the chalkboard as a classroom and therefore, with children. The texture may also be of watercolor and its uneven gradience may note the amateur skill of children (due to lack of practice, not implying inheritance).

7. VALUE

There is a light and dark contrast with the dark piano and light objects, background and font around it. This brings focus onto the piano. And considering that there aren't many tones for each color (1 shade of yellow, 2 shades of blue, and 2 shades of brown), there isn't much depth to the poster. Although the text may pop, there the objects come off as 2D. The 2D effect also provides a friendly and informal tone to whole image. 


PRINCIPLE #...

1. FOCAL POINT 
  • Rule 1: have one - CHECKED (piano)
  • Rule 2: have only one - CHECKED (only piano)

2. CONTRAST 
  • Value - CHECKED (light & dark)
  • Lines - CHECKED  (makes rotated perpendicular lines)
  • Colors - CHECKED (blue & yellow are opp. colors on the color wheel; i.e. complementary colors)
3. BALANCE

Asymmetry is positively slanted which creates an lively and upbeat feel to it. It makes it more visually exciting and visually interesting. 

4. MOVEMENT

There are no visible signs of movement but the asymmetry and slanted image creates a lively tone to it. It's almost as if the lines of the image creates movement rather than with a blurred effect. 

5. RHYTHM 

Color tones are repeated which gives off a "rhythmic movement...like a backbeat" (Golombisky & Hagen, 2010, p.53). Ex: The same yellow shade is in the text from alternate sides, girl A's dress, girl A's shoe, and girl B's hair, all with similar spacing from each other. 

6. PERSPECTIVE 

Atmospheric perspective: The foreground images (piano, chair, the girls) have a darker richer value than the washed-up pale-blue background. This creates the depth of what is viewed closer in the bird's eye view. 

7. UNITY 

Everything does look like they go together. Even the extended leg of the girl in a yellow dress looks like it belongs there. The extensive occupies the largest space in the poster which then makes it similar to the other spaces. 


COMMENTS...

I really like this design - the overall tone of the poster gives me slight smile and a curious feeling. I am impressed that even the designers from the early 1900's got it right - so design is not some sort of new field - it's been here from the start of media! 
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White Space Activity 2: Comparing Social Media Websites
Venn Diagram of Facebook's and Twitter's Website Design: grid structure 

SCREENSHOTS 

Facebook (1)
All 5 columns has content.



Twitter (1)
The use of 3 columns from the center creates a simple and clean feel to the website.
                                                                           Facebook (1)
So many visuals make the website look cluttered. Also, which visual is important? Ads or other users' content?

Twitter (2)
Surprisingly, there were no ads! Only visuals posted from other users.
COMMENTS...

I didn't realize how Facebook's design is not that visually appealing - especially with the abundance of ads. The large visuals of ads in the news feed and on the side bars can make the material distracting and diminishes the social focus. I feel that because Facebook is very popular and that I have used it for years made me a "Facebook fan" (i.e. I go on Facebook daily) and therefore, accept its design no matter how cluttered with ads it is. Twitter, on the other hand, is less cluttered and visually appealing. The content is from followed users and all of the information about your account seems to just be there. 

6 comments:

  1. I found it interesting how you compared facebook and twitter. Using these social networks so much, we don't get bothered by all the other things distractions in the surrounding. There definitely are too many Ads on facebook. That's why I like going on facebook through the app on my phone. There are no Ads and you only see images and content posted by your friends.

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  2. Vivian,

    i think the simplistic shapes found in the recital poster has to do with the fact that the recital is for amateur piano players. I like the use of blue and yellow primary colors coupled with the neutral brown. The yellow and blue dresses immediately captured my attention and drew my eyes downward from the grand piano.

    I found that I've actually become desensitized to the ads on Facebook. I hardly ever look in the column anymore because they bear no importance to me. I'm not sure if I agree that Facebook uses a 5 column grid- I see three. Could you explain why it's 5 columns? The same thing with Twitter- I only see two columns.

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  3. For Facebook, I wasn't sure if it was 5 or 3 column because it seemed that it depended on whether the window is in full view or not (and then the margins would be wider or narrower). I considered Twitter to be 3 columns because I interpreted the white space as margins, or the blue portion, and to be part of the design. I dont think that columns are consisted on only "explicit columns" of where text is, but the amount of margin or background should also be considered.

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  4. Hi Vivian. One thing I think about the poster is that the colors are a little off. When the red text goes off into the blue background, I need to focus a little more to read it. The girl in the blue dress kind of blends into the blue background so it looks like a floating head with arms and hair. It could also just be my eyes going bad and my stubbornness not to get glasses.
    I agree with your comments on Facebook. There are many flaws in it, but everyone is addicted so nothing is going to change if it is still productive. Zuckerberg does control all media though, so hopefully he doesn't hear us bringing up anything negative about his site.

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  5. Oh! I see what you mean about it being a bit difficult to read the reddish text. I guess I didn't feel that way because I was looking at it for so long - same with the girl's blue dress. Thank you for your input! And I agree with you about the public's hold onto Facebook despite the layout.

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  6. Hi Vivian,

    I love the image you selected to critique -- that poster from 1936 is retro chic, right up my alley. I also played the piano for 16 years so the subject of the ad is near and dear to my heart ;) You did a lovely job of articulating the elements and principles this visual portrays. Nicely done!

    As far as your grid analysis is concerned, I have two immediate reactions. First off, WOW! Kudos to you for taking the time to draw the lines on each image and embed them into your post to demonstrate how you felt the grid lines were presented. The Venn Diagram was another nice touch -- terrific use of visuals! Second, I'm afraid I'm going to have to defer to Lexi's take on the grid itself which each of these websites. Twitter follows a traditional two-line layout while Facebook follows the three-line approach. I do appreciate your taking the time to respond to Lexi, explaining your perspective on the assignment. I don't want you to think that your take on this task is "wrong" but I did want to let you know that these layouts are simplistic for a reason -- less is more, and Facebook and Twitter both realize that. While the Facebook ads annoy me to no end (I find myself saying "No" and "Uninterested" a LOT) there is a grid format that sticks to "info affecting your account" / "info from those you follow" / irritating ads (or, possible "likes" if you do happen to like what they suggest!)

    With Twitter, it's another basic - "suggested followers / you can post here" and then "who you follow - their content here." Backgrounds are customizable, as are your banner at the top of the screen with your bio, but it doesn't affect the grid itself.

    Hope these explanations help!

    Overall, I can tell how much effort you put into developing this post -- thanks for taking the extra time to do so!

    prof h

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